More of the Selenar Sisters

This is a very adorable picture. It is a sweet expression and how caring the older woman is to the younger and is helping her swing. This is nice concept. The main issue is that, though this is a very cute picture, it is hard to see and distinguish between the characters and background because the lineart or outline is not dark enough and the lineart is not consistent enough. Now, it is not a necessity to have to close lines, but because the colors are not solid, as in there are inconsistencies, the line have to close and have more of a form than a sketchy aspect.
Keep up the good work!